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Bryant Morrill's avatar

I enjoyed this story. To me, it emphasizes the perils of taking matters of justice into one's own hands. This is why society needs rules, and trained judges to interpret and apply those rules. Without that, its anarchy.

Victoria Stoilova's avatar

The line “Sometimes peace is ugly” is excellent. Besides being credible and believable, it’s seductive.

We are left to feel the discomfort of judgment forming, and the narrator’s position is well judged.

“That’s different.”

“Is it?”

“Is it?” is devastatingly precise because it is so short. The reader can hear it. The reader can utter it, and it makes them uncomfortable.

The final line, “Maybe they’ll get my living room back,” is quietly brutal, like a monster quietly walking in the night.

The Association: the father’s judgment made portable, exported to another unspecified body.

The lingering discomfort I feel about the ending—that is the ending working.

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